假如你是李华正在一所美国学校学习英文．你对学校的周末音乐俱乐部usiclubateekend很感兴趣决定申请加入．现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信内容如下．表示有意加入．介绍英语特长．说明性格优势．期待满意答复注意．词数左右．可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯eariradammiuaa题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网——

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息对学校的周末音乐俱乐部（Music Club at Weekend）很感兴趣，决定申请加入． 现给该俱乐部负责人写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：表示有意加入；介绍英语特长；说明性格优势；期待满意答复2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达take the English course上英文课，if possible如果可能的话，be good at 擅长，play the piano弹钢琴，above all最重要的是，Look forward to 盼望I'm interested in Music Club at weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（高分句型一）I have been playing the piano for more than 14 years and I once won the third p；ace in a nation-wide piano playing competition．（高分句型二）As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，    I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the English course at our school．I'm interested in Music Club at weekend and I'd like to join it if possible．（高分句型一）I'm good at playing the piano．I have been playing the piano for more than 14 years and I once won the third p；ace in a nation-wide piano playing competition．（高分句型二）Also I can sing Chinese fork songs very well．As for my personalities，I think I'm open-minded，friendly and easy-going，and above all，I really enjoy making friends with people from all around the world．（高分句型三）I would be very happy if I can be admitted into the club!Looking forward to your reply!   Best wishes!                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．